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than that colder, lowly light—
none has felt less right
as your lips glide over mine,
synchronized; a most bitter wine.
can one help thoughts held
deep into the night, conscience quelled?
liberal drops of oil [filth-riddled liquid]
leak from your mouth to mine, our lip lock insipid.
my interest gone, displaced at first touch—
your lips now a feckless crutch;
sorry my dear…
it seems my passion has yet to appear.
none has felt less right
as your lips glide over mine,
synchronized; a most bitter wine.
can one help thoughts held
deep into the night, conscience quelled?
liberal drops of oil [filth-riddled liquid]
leak from your mouth to mine, our lip lock insipid.
my interest gone, displaced at first touch—
your lips now a feckless crutch;
sorry my dear…
it seems my passion has yet to appear.
Literature
Matchstick
irreplaceable yet unnecessary
leave me in your retrospect
where you found me, unwanted & with a question mark over my head
or a Matchstick, maybe
I'm the fire you started &
couldn't put out
the one you doused &
the One you'll freeze without.
Literature
Devastation
Aftershocks shook her soul for weeks.
Literature
Ceteris Paribus
In an eon
You and I will greet the choate moon
Surrounded by her fairy dogs
warrior wolves and magnetic fox tails
who howl some foretelling tune
decoded only by the whistling winds
within my once listless room
I nip your Adam's apple by my Cupid's bow
we are a perfect art, a Sistine Michelangelo
We are stomata of the umpteen,
swimming in each other's dulcet drippings
of halved and pitted French tongues and ears
Let the years pass in this gentle deaf-muteness
where Ceteris Paribus
In this, Hallowed and His Seraphims know
how in the glow of one night tide
the firmament of all
folded into my limitless room
You and I part in sweet sorrow
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An entry for #ThePoetryofDA's Inspiration Contest.
The first line is the last line of Edgar Allan Poe's "Evening Star".
Written to: "All Fall Down" by OneRepublic.
Feedback is welcome!
The first line is the last line of Edgar Allan Poe's "Evening Star".
Written to: "All Fall Down" by OneRepublic.
Feedback is welcome!
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This is really great! It is like the moment when a love story has suddenly gone cold and nothing the two do will ever resurrect what they once had. Really lovely rhyme scheme!