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trembling words, falling from mouths
desperate to drink the essence of life—
aching to feel the scorching elixir slide
down their throat and coat the linings of
their stomachs, implosive embalming…
desperate to drink the essence of life—
traveling from the heart outwards, leaving
organs blackened in its wake and muscles
torn and tissues stretched as escapes fall into
vanity (beauty sacrificed by juxtaposed phrases)…
traveling from the heart outwards, leaving
words unspoken and emotions left bare, experiencing
a paltry happiness and slighted love—we luxuriate in a
false sensation: joy and intrigue and hope, lies we told
ourselves to make everything okay and to ignore [the]
words unspoken and emotions left bare, experiencing
intoxicated adulation, lines blurred and eyes bloodshot
swollen shut by feigned illumination and chosen stupidity;
hungover with heads pounding, simulating a bolstered
bliss…[alcohol has nothing on love]
desperate to drink the essence of life—
aching to feel the scorching elixir slide
down their throat and coat the linings of
their stomachs, implosive embalming…
desperate to drink the essence of life—
traveling from the heart outwards, leaving
organs blackened in its wake and muscles
torn and tissues stretched as escapes fall into
vanity (beauty sacrificed by juxtaposed phrases)…
traveling from the heart outwards, leaving
words unspoken and emotions left bare, experiencing
a paltry happiness and slighted love—we luxuriate in a
false sensation: joy and intrigue and hope, lies we told
ourselves to make everything okay and to ignore [the]
words unspoken and emotions left bare, experiencing
intoxicated adulation, lines blurred and eyes bloodshot
swollen shut by feigned illumination and chosen stupidity;
hungover with heads pounding, simulating a bolstered
bliss…[alcohol has nothing on love]
Literature
Matchstick
irreplaceable yet unnecessary
leave me in your retrospect
where you found me, unwanted & with a question mark over my head
or a Matchstick, maybe
I'm the fire you started &
couldn't put out
the one you doused &
the One you'll freeze without.
Literature
The Frozen Burn of a Broken Heart
Out of childish fears
And knowing you'd disappear
I knew not to touch or feel
For every time I do
I retreat pale and blue
From the icy burns within my heart
After being stabbed and ripped apart
Trying not to feel a thing
And knowing I'd be broken again
But I still try to hope
Tying crimson ribbons into rope
But the rope's become a noose
And there's no way to make it loose
Maybe I should give my wings a try
Find a building and try to fly
After all I'm not that great
I just found you much too late
Now it's only me and my shattered mind
Left to sit and replay memories on rewind
Looking for the tiniest thread to grasp
Forever
Literature
Devastation
Aftershocks shook her soul for weeks.
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Well the language was well used but for me it was too verbose - I would require some thoughtful reading to properly understand the piece. I did manage to get the first stanza and it was quite well written but ahead... well it was sort of vague