Inspired by and Written to: Frank Ocean's "There Will Be Tears"
Feedback is appreciated, guideline questions: Does the poem stay on topic?
(It seemed to as I wrote it but I knew what train of that I was following, the reader normally catches something completely different.) Is the imagery too vague, what about too strong?
What did you manage to glean from the poem? What do you think is happening?
Is the length of the poem too long or short? the lines?
What do you think of the song?
Thank you for reading!EDIT:
Submitted to #Daily-Lit-Deviations
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